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It was sunset and 500 soldiers from the army where crowded around the flag of the base, but they didn't know what was happening.Neon Green was standing 5 m away from the flag and was waiting for War End.War End was in the medic tent and sitting next to her.He looked at her and asked her.
War End:Whats your name?
She opened her eyes and smiled.FinLand....its FinLand.
War End:FinLand...what a beautiful name.She fully open her eyes and slowly said:Thank you....!War End didn't say anything just looked out side.He turned back and saw her smile turn in to a sad face.
FinLand: Don't do it....please!War End turned away and said..
War End:For the safety for you and me its the only way.And the  he exited the tent.Neon Green was waiting for him and moments later they both were staring at each other.They were silent for 10 seconds and then Neon yelled...
Neon Green:IT DIDN'T HAVE TO END THIS WAY!War End looked down and after a moment he yelled back....
War End:IT DIDN'T HAVE TO START THIS WAY!He charged at him whit his head first.Neon didn't see it coming and War End knocked him on the ground,War Ends horn penetrated his body and he was bleeding,Neon looked at his wound,then he flew up bucked War End in the face!He passed out for 3 seconds then he got up but Neon had broke his right eye and he only saw in his left.War End jumped and he took him to the ground.He jumped on his both wings...Neon didn't scream only let out a tear and grabbed his horn and broke it.War End started to fell dizzy but he didn't care but Neon bucked him of of him.The fight keep going on for 10 minutes when both of them had already lost 2 gallons of blood.They both fought it was time to finish it and toke charging poses.Every pony was looking and fought this was going to be the end of one of them.They both charged at the same time but when they were 2 meters away from each other War End jumped and hoofed Neon mouth,He broke his jar and he fell on the ground.War End looked at him and said....
War End:Its over...time for you to go.He helped him get up.Neon was silent (mainly cause his jar was broken)He turned around and walked out of the base,from a distance you could see that he wasn't angry any more..he felt something different but we will never know what it was.War End didn't say anything just picked up what was left of his horn and walked to the medic tent.FinLand was sleeping.War End put an  eye patch on his eye and put his horn back together then he sat next to FinLand.She opened her eyes but didn't say anything,they both looked at each other,he stroke her mane and kissed her on the forehead.She smiled and asked him
FinLand:Is it over?
War End:Yes...now it is.
War End offered to buy her a house in Pony ville next to his but she said she would be more happy to live with him.After 3 days he broth her to her new home.FinLand had fallen i love with him when he was carrying her throw the field.War End did a little bit later when he understood that he had to protect her.For FinLand War End was her father.He broth her in while no one else did and protected her.Now they both live in War Ends house in Pony ville.

Thats  the full story friends..hope you liked it :)
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ColorCoatedArt Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
A really plesent ending! =) Too bad War and Neon had to go at. =(
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TheLOlPie Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Artist
Yeah but it was the only way to save FinLand so he had to do it
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Nykkes64 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Simply Beautiful!!!!
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TheLOlPie Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Artist
:iconcuteblushplz: thanks
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Nykkes64 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome pal!! ^0^
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Nethernar Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
Tis beautiful story. ^^
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TheLOlPie Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks :) i wrote a half of it but they i accidentally deleted it so i had to write it again.Oh and you sentence is wrongs its *This is a beautiful story*
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Nethernar Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
Nay, my sentence is not wrong. Tis only written in Ye Olde style. ^^
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TheLOlPie Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Artist
Jā un es tev atbildu Latviski ^ ^
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Nethernar Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
Ja, det var meget forståelig. ^^
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